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Misconduct
Dec. 17th, 2007 08:52 pmThis is original fic - and this is about the fourth version of it. It's this one that I handed in for one module at university. And only now on rereading do I find that I rather dislike some of the phrasing and suchlike. *chews lip* Well, too late now, I guess.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2095
Summary: You've outlined your case, but what chance do you really have?
( Misconduct )
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2095
Summary: You've outlined your case, but what chance do you really have?
( Misconduct )
Grammar Haikus
May. 15th, 2007 05:36 pmA while ago, BeccaElizabeth mentioned the idea of giving creative feedback to soften the blow of pointing out problems with fics... She mentioned Grammar Haikus, as a short, easy sort of thing to put in a comment, both constructive and creative at the same time.
Inspired by that, and a few other thoughts on fanfic writing, I give you:
( Grammar Haikus! )
Now, I'm not sure how good they are. I like a couple. And they were kind of written specifically for BeccaElizabeth, but if anybody wants to use them while you're wandering around reviewing things, you are more than welcome.
Like icons, credit would be shiny, likewise comments. :) Enjoy.
And feel free to muck about with them a bit if you think you could phrase them better (I only wrote them all today), suggest more ideas, or write your own. All joyful. ^_^
Inspired by that, and a few other thoughts on fanfic writing, I give you:
( Grammar Haikus! )
Now, I'm not sure how good they are. I like a couple. And they were kind of written specifically for BeccaElizabeth, but if anybody wants to use them while you're wandering around reviewing things, you are more than welcome.
Like icons, credit would be shiny, likewise comments. :) Enjoy.
And feel free to muck about with them a bit if you think you could phrase them better (I only wrote them all today), suggest more ideas, or write your own. All joyful. ^_^
