This is great! I love the way you handled Jack's emotions because who wouldn't get severely traumatised by that? Might also explain his slightly too-calm reaction after Exit Wounds, too. I love his old team and really, Jack's just too adorable and I'm a big h/c fan so: thank you, it's lovely!
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Date: 2008-06-01 05:17 pm (UTC)