(Sorry for the delay in replying - LJ stopped sending me my emails...)
Do you know, I hate referring to Ianto as "the Welshman", and this is the first fic I've ever done it in? I had to, to maintain the trainees' perspective, but it grated every step of the way. Sorry it didn't work for you, it wasn't meant to be a stumbling block! Unless I do another outsider-point-of-view I won't be using that phrase again, don't you worry!
And thank you very much for a lovely detailed comment! It's always a relief to be told what's not working as well as what is, because then I can fix it next time. ;) Thank you indeed, and I'm glad you liked it despite the epithet trouble! ^_^
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Date: 2007-11-07 12:47 am (UTC)Do you know, I hate referring to Ianto as "the Welshman", and this is the first fic I've ever done it in? I had to, to maintain the trainees' perspective, but it grated every step of the way. Sorry it didn't work for you, it wasn't meant to be a stumbling block! Unless I do another outsider-point-of-view I won't be using that phrase again, don't you worry!
And thank you very much for a lovely detailed comment! It's always a relief to be told what's not working as well as what is, because then I can fix it next time. ;) Thank you indeed, and I'm glad you liked it despite the epithet trouble! ^_^