" They reached the top of the steps and Harkness let go of the doctor, walking away and saying, “Never mind, Ianto, Owen’s sure he’s alright,” and not even looking back when the doctor fell over. "

Now if more people treated Owen like this I'm sure he'd be less of a prat!

I really enjoyed reading this. I only have one small problem - I don't think Jack would be pawing all over Ianto in the middle of this, I really don't (unless this was a requirement of the challenge?)

Now excuse me while I go and read some more of your writing (smile) . . . .